1. Phân tích đề và nhóm thông tin

 

Đề bài

The maps below illustrate the current design of an office building and the proposed layout after redevelopment.

Dạng biểu đồ

Maps

 

Xác định đặc điểm tổng quan (Overview Features)

Đặc điểm nổi bật 1: The office building is expected to undergo substantial redevelopment, with the kitchen and canteen being converted into offices and the existing office layout being reorganised.

Đặc điểm nổi bật 2: The redevelopment will introduce several new facilities, including an outdoor seating area, a meeting area and a coffee machine, while the storeroom will remain in place and the WC will be relocated.

 

Chia nhóm dữ liệu cho các đoạn Thân bài (Data Grouping)

Body 1 Grouping: Present office building

Ý 1: Offices and entrances

Ý 2: Kitchen, canteen and storeroom

Ý 3: Grass and WC

 

Body 2 Grouping: Future office building

Ý 1: New office arrangement

Ý 2: New facilities and outdoor areas

Ý 3: Storeroom and WC

Triển khai phân tích

 

Mở bài (Paraphrase)

The maps compare the current layout of an office building with the proposed design following redevelopment.

(Tạm dịch: Hai bản đồ so sánh bố cục hiện tại của một tòa nhà văn phòng với thiết kế được đề xuất sau khi tái phát triển.)

 

Tóm tắt tổng quan (Overview)

Overall, the office building will be significantly reorganised, with several existing rooms converted into offices and the current office arrangement replaced by fewer but larger offices. In addition, new communal and outdoor facilities will be introduced, while the storeroom will remain in its original position and the WC will be moved.

(Tạm dịch: Nhìn chung, tòa nhà văn phòng sẽ được bố trí lại đáng kể, với một số phòng hiện tại được chuyển đổi thành văn phòng và hệ thống văn phòng hiện có được thay thế bằng ít văn phòng hơn nhưng lớn hơn. Ngoài ra, các tiện ích chung và không gian ngoài trời mới sẽ được bổ sung, trong khi phòng chứa đồ giữ nguyên vị trí và nhà vệ sinh được di chuyển.)

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2. Lập dàn ý chi tiết cho bài viết

 

Introduction

Paraphrase lại đề bài bằng cách thay thế illustrate → compare, current design → current layout, proposed layout → planned design, after redevelopment → following redevelopment.

 

Overview

Đặc điểm chung:

• The building will undergo considerable structural changes.

• The number and arrangement of offices will be reorganised.

Điểm nổi bật:

• The kitchen and canteen will be converted into offices.

• New facilities such as outdoor seating and a meeting area will be added.

• The storeroom will remain, while the WC will be relocated.

 

Body Paragraph 1

Trật tự sắp xếp: Offices → Kitchen, canteen and storeroom → Grass and WC.

Topic sentence: The current office building contains four small offices and several service areas arranged around a large central space.

Detail 1: At present, four similarly sized offices are located along the lower-left and central part of the building, with entrances provided from the central open area. A large grass-covered section occupies the left side, while another grass area is situated on the right.

Detail 2: Along the upper side are a kitchen, a canteen and a storeroom, while a small WC is positioned below the storeroom. The building currently has entrances on the left and at the bottom.

 

Body Paragraph 2

Trật tự sắp xếp: Upper offices → Lower offices and entrances → New communal facilities.

Topic sentence: The proposed redevelopment will replace the existing arrangement with larger offices and a wider range of shared facilities.

Detail 1: The kitchen and canteen will be converted into two offices, while the storeroom will remain in the same position. The four existing offices will be replaced by two larger offices at the bottom, separated by a new entrance in the centre.

Detail 2: The grass on the left will become an outdoor seating area, while the right-hand side will include a meeting area and seating. A coffee machine will also be installed between the storeroom and the relocated WC, and a new entrance will be provided on the left side.

 

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3. Bài mẫu hoàn chỉnh

The maps compare the current layout of an office building with the proposed design following redevelopment.

Overall, the office building will be significantly reorganised, with several existing rooms converted into offices and the current office arrangement replaced by fewer but larger offices. In addition, new communal and outdoor facilities will be introduced, while the storeroom will remain in its original position and the WC will be moved.

At present, four similarly sized offices are arranged along the lower-left and central part of the building, opening onto a large central space. A grass-covered area is located on the left, while another occupies the right side. Along the upper section are a kitchen, a canteen and a storeroom, with a small WC positioned beneath the storeroom. The building currently has entrances on the left side and at the bottom.

Under the redevelopment plan, the kitchen and canteen will be converted into two offices, while the storeroom will remain unchanged. The four existing offices will be replaced by two larger offices at the bottom, with a new entrance positioned between them. The grass on the left will become an outdoor seating area, while a meeting area with chairs will be added on the right. In addition, a coffee machine will be installed between the storeroom and a relocated WC in the upper-right corner, and another entrance will be provided on the left.

(Word count: 183)

 

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4. Lexical Resources List

 

New Vocabulary

1. office layout (noun phrase): bố cục văn phòng

E.g. The office layout will be substantially changed after redevelopment.

2. undergo redevelopment (verb phrase): trải qua quá trình tái phát triển

E.g. The building will undergo redevelopment in the near future.

3. be converted into (verb phrase): được chuyển đổi thành

E.g. The kitchen will be converted into an office.

4. reorganise the layout (verb phrase): bố trí lại mặt bằng

E.g. The existing office space will be reorganised.

5. similarly sized offices (noun phrase): các văn phòng có kích thước tương tự nhau

E.g. Four similarly sized offices are currently located at the bottom.

6. communal facility (noun phrase): tiện ích dùng chung

E.g. Several new communal facilities will be introduced.

7. outdoor seating area (noun phrase): khu vực chỗ ngồi ngoài trời

E.g. The grass on the left will be replaced by an outdoor seating area.

8. meeting area (noun phrase): khu vực họp

E.g. A meeting area will be added to the right-hand side.

9. remain in its original position (verb phrase): giữ nguyên vị trí ban đầu

E.g. The storeroom will remain in its original position.

10. be relocated (verb): được di chuyển sang vị trí khác

E.g. The WC will be relocated to the upper-right corner.

11. replace the existing arrangement (verb phrase): thay thế bố cục hiện tại

E.g. Two larger offices will replace the existing arrangement.

12. following redevelopment (prepositional phrase): sau khi tái phát triển

E.g. Several new facilities will be added following redevelopment.

 

Sentence Structures

1. The maps compare the current layout of + place + with the proposed design following redevelopment. (Dùng để mở bài.)

E.g. The maps compare the current layout of an office building with the proposed design following redevelopment.

2. Overall, + place + will be significantly reorganised, with + existing feature + converted into + new feature. (Dùng để viết Overview.)

E.g. Overall, the office building will be significantly reorganised, with the kitchen and canteen converted into offices.

3. At present, + feature + is/are located + location, while + feature + occupies + location. (Dùng để mô tả hiện trạng.)

E.g. At present, four similarly sized offices are located at the bottom, while grass occupies the left and right sides.

4. Under the redevelopment plan, + existing feature + will be replaced by + new feature, while + feature + will remain unchanged. (Dùng để mô tả thay đổi.)

E.g. Under the redevelopment plan, the existing offices will be replaced by two larger ones, while the storeroom will remain unchanged.

5. The + existing feature + will be converted into + new feature. (Dùng để mô tả chuyển đổi công năng.)

E.g. The kitchen and canteen will be converted into two offices.

6. A + facility + will be added to + location, while + existing feature + will be relocated to + location. (Dùng để mô tả các tiện ích mới và sự di chuyển.)

E.g. A meeting area will be added to the right, while the WC will be relocated to the upper-right corner.

7. The + feature + on the + side + will be replaced by + new feature. (Dùng để mô tả sự thay thế theo vị trí.)

E.g. The grass on the left will be replaced by an outdoor seating area.

8. The number of + feature + will be reduced/increased, with + new arrangement + replacing the existing one. (Dùng để mô tả thay đổi về số lượng.)

E.g. The number of offices will be reduced, with two larger rooms replacing the four existing ones.

 

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