1. Phân tích đề và nhóm thông tin

 

Đề bài

The following charts illustrate the number of tourists visiting Australia from three different countries in 1995 and 2005, as well as the trends in types of travel chosen by tourists between 1995 and 2005.

Dạng biểu đồ

Mixed charts (Bar chart and Line graph)

 

Xác định đặc điểm tổng quan (Overview Features)

Đặc điểm nổi bật 1: The UK and the US recorded substantial increases in visitor numbers, while Japan experienced a noticeable decline and lost its leading position.

Đặc điểm nổi bật 2: Staying at resorts remained the more popular travel option overall, although backpacking grew steadily and almost caught up with resort holidays by the end of the period.

 

Chia nhóm dữ liệu cho các đoạn Thân bài (Data Grouping)

Body 1 Grouping: Tourist arrivals by country

Ý 1: 1995

Ý 2: 2005

Body 2 Grouping: Types of travel

Ý 1: Staying at resorts

Ý 2: Backpacking

 

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Triển khai phân tích

Mở bài (Paraphrase)

The bar chart compares the numbers of tourists visiting Australia from the UK, the US and Japan in 1995 and 2005, while the line graph illustrates changes in the two main types of travel over the same period.

(Tạm dịch: Biểu đồ cột so sánh số lượng khách du lịch đến Úc từ Anh, Mỹ và Nhật Bản vào năm 1995 và 2005, trong khi biểu đồ đường minh họa sự thay đổi của hai hình thức du lịch chính trong cùng giai đoạn.)

 

Tóm tắt tổng quan (Overview)

Overall, visitor numbers from the UK and the US increased considerably, whereas those from Japan declined and fell behind the other two countries by 2005. In addition, staying at resorts remained the dominant form of travel despite a decline after 2000, while backpacking rose steadily and almost matched resort holidays at the end of the period.

(Tạm dịch: Nhìn chung, lượng khách từ Anh và Mỹ tăng đáng kể, trong khi khách từ Nhật Bản giảm và tụt xuống sau hai quốc gia này vào năm 2005. Bên cạnh đó, nghỉ dưỡng tại resort vẫn là hình thức du lịch phổ biến nhất mặc dù giảm sau năm 2000, còn du lịch bụi tăng đều và gần như bắt kịp loại hình nghỉ dưỡng vào cuối giai đoạn.)

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2. Lập dàn ý chi tiết cho bài viết

 

Introduction

Paraphrase lại đề bài bằng cách thay thế illustrate → compare/show, number of tourists → visitor numbers, types of travel → travel preferences.

 

Overview

Đặc điểm chung:

• The UK and the US experienced strong growth in tourist arrivals.

• Japan showed the opposite trend.

Điểm nổi bật:

• Resort holidays remained the most popular overall.

• Backpacking increased continuously and nearly equalled resort travel by 2005

 

Body Paragraph 1

Trật tự sắp xếp: 1995 → 2005.

Topic sentence: The sources of tourists changed considerably over the ten-year period.

Detail 1: In 1995, Japan was the largest source of visitors, with around 1.5 million tourists, compared with approximately 800,000 from the UK and only 500,000 from the US.

Detail 2: By 2005, the pattern had reversed. Tourist numbers from both the UK and the US had risen sharply to about 1.5 million each, while the figure for Japan fell significantly to roughly 1 million.

 

Body Paragraph 2

Trật tự sắp xếp: Staying at resorts → Backpacking.

Topic sentence: Tourist preferences for travel styles also changed noticeably during the period.

Detail 1: Staying at resorts was the dominant option throughout most of the period, increasing from around 1.6 million in 1995 to a peak of 2.5 million in 2000 before dropping to approximately 1.1 million in 2005.

Detail 2: By contrast, backpacking rose steadily from only about 200,000 tourists in 1995 to roughly 750,000 in 2000, before climbing further to around 1.1 million in 2005, matching the popularity of resort holidays.

 

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3. Bài mẫu hoàn chỉnh

The bar chart compares the numbers of tourists visiting Australia from the UK, the US and Japan in 1995 and 2005, while the line graph illustrates changes in the two main types of travel over the same period.

Overall, visitor numbers from the UK and the US increased considerably, whereas those from Japan declined and fell behind the other two countries by 2005. In addition, staying at resorts remained the dominant form of travel despite a decline after 2000, while backpacking rose steadily and almost matched resort holidays at the end of the period.

The sources of tourists changed considerably over the ten-year period. In 1995, Japan was the largest contributor, sending approximately 1.5 million visitors to Australia, compared with around 800,000 from the UK and only 500,000 from the US. By 2005, however, this pattern had reversed, as tourist numbers from both the UK and the US had climbed dramatically to about 1.5 million each, whereas the figure for Japan fell to roughly 1 million.

Tourist preferences also changed noticeably. Staying at resorts was the most popular choice, rising from about 1.6 million travellers in 1995 to a peak of approximately 2.5 million in 2000 before declining sharply to around 1.1 million in 2005. In contrast, backpacking followed a continuous upward trend, increasing from only about 200,000 visitors to around 750,000 in 2000 and eventually reaching roughly 1.1 million by 2005, thereby matching resort holidays.

(Word count: 192)

 

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4. Lexical Resources List

 

New Vocabulary

1. tourist arrivals (noun phrase): lượng khách du lịch đến

E.g. Tourist arrivals from the UK increased significantly.

2. visitor numbers (noun phrase): số lượng du khách

E.g. Visitor numbers rose over the decade.

3. largest source of tourists (noun phrase): nguồn khách du lịch lớn nhất

E.g. Japan was the largest source of tourists in 1995.

4. travel preference (noun phrase): sở thích du lịch

E.g. Travel preferences changed considerably over time.

5. stay at resorts (verb phrase): nghỉ dưỡng tại khu nghỉ dưỡng

E.g. Many tourists chose to stay at resorts.

6. backpacking (noun): du lịch bụi

E.g. Backpacking became increasingly popular.

7. peak at (verb phrase): đạt đỉnh

E.g. Resort holidays peaked at 2.5 million visitors.

8. reverse the pattern (verb phrase): đảo ngược xu hướng

E.g. The pattern was reversed by 2005.

9. rise sharply (verb phrase): tăng mạnh

E.g. Visitor numbers from the US rose sharply.

10. decline significantly (verb phrase): giảm đáng kể

E.g. Tourist arrivals from Japan declined significantly.

11. dominant travel option (noun phrase): hình thức du lịch phổ biến nhất

E.g. Resort holidays remained the dominant travel option.

12. continuous upward trend (noun phrase): xu hướng tăng liên tục

E.g. Backpacking showed a continuous upward trend.

 

Sentence Structures

1. The bar chart compares + visitor numbers +, while the line graph illustrates + travel trends +. (Dùng để mở bài.)

E.g. The bar chart compares visitor numbers from three countries, while the line graph illustrates travel preferences.

2. Overall, + country/country group + experienced an increase, whereas + country + showed the opposite trend. (Dùng để viết Overview.)

E.g. Overall, the UK and the US experienced an increase, whereas Japan showed the opposite trend.

3. In + year +, + country + was the largest source of visitors, with + figure +. (Dùng để mô tả số liệu.)

E.g. In 1995, Japan was the largest source of visitors, with around 1.5 million tourists.

4. By + year +, this pattern had reversed, as + country + overtook + country +. (Dùng để mô tả sự thay đổi thứ hạng.)

E.g. By 2005, this pattern had reversed, as the UK and the US overtook Japan.

5. + Travel type + reached a peak of + figure + before declining to + figure +. (Dùng để mô tả xu hướng tăng rồi giảm.)

E.g. Staying at resorts reached a peak of 2.5 million before declining to around 1.1 million.

6. In contrast, + travel type + followed a steady upward trend, eventually matching + comparison + by the end of the period. (Dùng để mô tả xu hướng tăng và bắt kịp.)

E.g. In contrast, backpacking followed a steady upward trend, eventually matching resort holidays by the end of the period.

 

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