1. Phân tích đề và nhóm thông tin

 

Đề bài

The table below provides information about the number of residents from five European countries living in each other’s nations in 2011. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

Dạng biểu đồ

Table

 

Xác định đặc điểm tổng quan (Overview Features)

Đặc điểm nổi bật 1: Germany and the UK were the most popular destinations for residents from the other four countries, with approximately 1.2 million and 1.0 million foreign residents respectively. Poland was by far the least popular destination, with only 6,000 people from the other countries.

Đặc điểm nổi bật 2: Polish residents formed the largest group living abroad, at 1.168 million, while Spanish residents were the smallest group, at just over 202,000.

 

Chia nhóm dữ liệu cho các đoạn Thân bài (Data Grouping)

Body 1 Grouping: Most popular destination countries

Ý 1: Germany

Ý 2: The UK

Ý 3: Spain

 

Body 2 Grouping: Less popular destination countries and country of origin totals

Ý 1: Italy

Ý 2: Poland

Ý 3: Largest and smallest expatriate groups

Triển khai phân tích

Mở bài (Paraphrase)

The table compares the numbers of people from five European countries who were living in the other four countries in 2011.

(Tạm dịch: Bảng so sánh số lượng người đến từ năm quốc gia châu Âu sinh sống tại bốn quốc gia còn lại vào năm 2011.)

 

Tóm tắt tổng quan (Overview)

Overall, Germany was the most popular destination for residents from the other countries, followed by the UK and Spain, whereas Poland attracted by far the fewest foreign residents. In terms of country of origin, Polish people formed the largest expatriate group, while Spanish nationals accounted for the smallest total.

(Tạm dịch: Nhìn chung, Đức là điểm đến phổ biến nhất đối với cư dân từ các quốc gia còn lại, tiếp theo là Anh và Tây Ban Nha, trong khi Ba Lan có ít cư dân nước ngoài nhất. Xét theo quốc gia xuất xứ, người Ba Lan tạo thành nhóm cư dân sống ở nước ngoài lớn nhất, còn người Tây Ban Nha có tổng số thấp nhất.)

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2. Lập dàn ý chi tiết cho bài viết

 

Introduction

Paraphrase lại đề bài bằng cách thay thế provides information about → compares, number of residents → numbers of people, living in each other’s nations → living in the other four countries, và in 2011 → in the year 2011.

 

Overview

Đặc điểm chung:

• Germany and the UK were the main destinations for foreign residents.

• Poland had an extremely small foreign-resident population compared with the other destinations.

Điểm nổi bật:

• Polish people were the largest expatriate group overall.

• Spanish people were the smallest group living in the other four countries.

 

Body Paragraph 1

Trật tự sắp xếp: Germany → UK → Spain.

Topic sentence: Germany, the UK and Spain accommodated the vast majority of foreign residents listed in the table.

Detail 1: Germany was the most popular destination, with a total of 1,198,000 residents from the other four countries. The largest groups were Italians and Poles, numbering 556,000 and 426,000 respectively.

Detail 2: The UK ranked second, with 1,037,000 foreign residents, including 550,000 Poles and 297,000 Germans. Spain followed with 861,000 people, of whom 391,000 were British, making them the largest foreign group there.

 

Body Paragraph 2

Trật tự sắp xếp: Italy → Poland → Country-of-origin totals.

Topic sentence: Italy and especially Poland were much less common destinations for residents from the other countries.

Detail 1: Italy was home to 196,000 foreign residents from the four other nations, with Poles making up the largest group at 106,000, followed by Germans at 42,000.

Detail 2: Poland had by far the smallest foreign-resident population, with only 6,000 people in total. Meanwhile, when the figures are considered by country of origin, Polish people had the largest overall number living abroad, at 1,168,000, whereas Spaniards had the lowest total, at 202,170.

 

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3. Bài mẫu hoàn chỉnh

The table compares the numbers of people from five European countries who were living in the other four countries in 2011.

Overall, Germany was the most popular destination for residents from the other countries, followed by the UK and Spain, whereas Poland attracted by far the fewest foreign residents. In terms of country of origin, Polish people formed the largest expatriate group, while Spanish nationals accounted for the smallest total.

Germany accommodated the largest number of foreign residents, with a total of 1,198,000 people from the other four countries. The biggest groups were Italians and Poles, at 556,000 and 426,000 respectively. The UK ranked second, with 1,037,000 foreign residents, including 550,000 Poles and 297,000 Germans. Spain followed with 861,000 people, of whom 391,000 were British, making them the largest foreign group in the country.

By contrast, Italy and Poland were much less common destinations. Italy was home to 196,000 residents from the other countries, with Poles accounting for the largest group at 106,000, followed by Germans at 42,000. Poland had by far the smallest foreign-resident population, with just 6,000 people in total. However, when the figures are considered by country of origin, Polish people had the largest overall expatriate population, at 1,168,000, while Spaniards had the lowest figure, at 202,170.

(Word count: 184)

 

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4. Lexical Resources List

 

New Vocabulary

1. foreign resident (noun phrase): cư dân nước ngoài

E.g. Germany had the highest number of foreign residents.

2. destination country (noun phrase): quốc gia điểm đến

E.g. Germany was the most popular destination country.

3. country of origin (noun phrase): quốc gia xuất xứ

E.g. Polish people formed the largest group by country of origin.

4. expatriate group (noun phrase): nhóm người sống ở nước ngoài

E.g. Polish people formed the largest expatriate group.

5. accommodate (verb): có, tiếp nhận, là nơi cư trú của

E.g. Germany accommodated more than one million foreign residents.

6. account for (verb phrase): chiếm

E.g. Poles accounted for the largest group in Italy.

7. rank first/second (verb phrase): xếp thứ nhất/thứ hai

E.g. The UK ranked second among the destination countries.

8. by far (adverbial phrase): vượt trội, bỏ xa

E.g. Poland had by far the fewest foreign residents.

9. the largest group (noun phrase): nhóm lớn nhất

E.g. Italians were the largest group in Germany.

10. foreign-resident population (noun phrase): dân số cư dân nước ngoài

E.g. Poland had the smallest foreign-resident population.

11. live abroad (verb phrase): sống ở nước ngoài

E.g. More than one million Polish people lived abroad.

12. the lowest total (noun phrase): tổng số thấp nhất

E.g. Spaniards had the lowest total among the five nationalities.

 

Sentence Structures

 

1. The table compares the numbers of + nationality + living in + countries + in + year. (Dùng để mở bài.)

E.g. The table compares the numbers of people from five European countries living in the other four countries in 2011.

2. Overall, + country + was the most popular destination, followed by + country +, whereas + country + attracted the fewest foreign residents. (Dùng để viết Overview.)

E.g. Overall, Germany was the most popular destination, followed by the UK, whereas Poland attracted the fewest foreign residents.

3. + Country + accommodated a total of + figure + foreign residents, with + nationality + and + nationality + forming the largest groups. (Dùng để mô tả một quốc gia có nhiều cư dân nước ngoài.)

E.g. Germany accommodated a total of 1,198,000 foreign residents, with Italians and Poles forming the largest groups.

4. The largest group was + nationality +, at + figure +, followed by + nationality + at + figure. (Dùng để so sánh các nhóm cư dân.)

E.g. The largest group was Italian, at 556,000, followed by Polish residents at 426,000.

5. By contrast, + country + had by far the smallest foreign-resident population, with just + figure. (Dùng để nhấn mạnh sự chênh lệch lớn.)

E.g. By contrast, Poland had by far the smallest foreign-resident population, with just 6,000.

6. When considered by country of origin, + nationality + had the largest number living abroad, whereas + nationality + had the lowest total. (Dùng để chuyển từ điểm đến sang quốc gia xuất xứ.)

E.g. When considered by country of origin, Polish people had the largest number living abroad, whereas Spaniards had the lowest total.

 

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